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Re: Fleirzon: People of the Skies ) 9
…… It was late that night when Verdeyan got the chance to catch her breath again. Since lunch, Jonalla had nagged her nonstop with every household duty one could imagine. ...
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Re: Fleirzon: People of the Skies ) 3
Chapter two of fleirzon: Three: Tears, the cold and bitter Back on the platform, Verdeyan sat on the rough boards, stroking the ragged stumps of her shorn feathers. When her ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Fleirzon: People of the Skies ) 8
Ah, another chapter. I tried to keep my post a little shorter this time. This segment doesn't have a lot of action, but there's plenty of drama... Enjoy! .... “Gattlinian, ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Location Unknown: Mission Failed
I'll join up... Name: Jules Dickson Age: 19 Job: Medic and Anthropologist specializing in Extraterestrial Research Description: Distant, sad woman with a zeal for medicine and science, and enjoys deba
May 8, 2010 -
Re: Fleirzon: People of the Skies) 7-8
Another chapter of Fleirzon. Do enjoy, my dear readers! ;) The preceding chapters should be available under 'possible related items'. Thanks! ....... Slave!” Whined Jonalla, “Slave girl!” Verdey
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Orchids
I don't know very much about photography, well, nothing, really, but I do draw a lot, so I guess I have a little artistic insight. Just to warn you, I ...
May 5, 2010 -
Re: Fleirzon: People of the Skies )7
This is another installment of Fleirzon. Do enjoy! ......... Seven: Locher Pass Verdeyan sat in the hollow of a tree branch, outside another inn. Gattlin stood over her, carefully working ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Only Hope
Very good! This is truly an engrossing piece. The de scription of trying to get his attention through the rush at lockers is so realistic. I must say this is ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: FREAK
My, this is quite something! At the very begining I was under the impression the character had been hit by a car or grievously injured in some way (becuase of ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Like a Knife Through Cheese
Pain wells up in me My heart is weary My jet-black hair brushes my face I push it back These four lines are rather disjointed, without any sort of smooth ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Fleirzon: People of the Skies )6
Here's another installment. Do enjoy! .............. Six: Morning In Locher The next day came with clouds and rain that flowed from rooftop gutters into rain barrels that collected the town’s ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Fleirzon: People of the Skies )1-2 revised
Thanks, Andy. I've gone back through and edited some of the areas that you commented on. I also cut out that sub-plot about Gerra...Looking at where I want my story ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Fleirzon: People of the Skies )4-5
This is the continuation of Fleirzon 4-5... I hope you enjoy! ......... Four: On Shared Wings “I’ll untie you,” he said, taking her arm to make sure she wouldn’t fall ...
Apr 29, 2010 -
Re: Dead Glass
This is a very dramatic piece. What hooked me from the begining was the sensory details, the vibrant images and sensations. You're really gifted in that aspect. I loved it. ...
Apr 29, 2010 -
Re: Sunrise at the beach
All these photos are amazing! I'm not a photographer, so I don't have any criticism really, at all. Great job!
Apr 28, 2010
